These seem like screenshots more than menu screens in my opinion, they look like good screenshots but they honestly seem too colorful and shiny to be menu screens

In my honest opinion, these would be better with the gray-ish desolate tone that Skyrim has. Fits the whole theme of Skyrim more.

Also, another complaint about the color is that, menu text wouldn't stand out as well as it does with these backgrounds, it'd all blur together and you wouldn't be able to make out anything.

For screenshots i'd rate these at about 6/10, although for menu screens they get about 2/10

Sorry if i'm coming across as rough here, I just have pretty high standards.

Well, The top ones are screenshots technically   

Yes they are very bright

For the top ones the text probably wouldn't fit in well, but with the serana one they clearly do

Your opinion is your opinion, no need to apologies for it you have high standards because of your experience and the quality of your work, be proud of that
I am only a beginner and i've never done this before so I ain't gonna get it pefect the first time
But anyway, what about these? its a screen of fort dawnguard but i made it into a painting so it does appear a bit darker and less shiny

No Logo:

Original Written logo:

Painted in Logo:

I took those screenshots straight from the main-menu so you could see how the rest of the text fits in.

Thank you very much, I appreciate your input
Cheers

Good job so far. The original main menu for skyrim was getting kinda dull for me, so this would be a great change of scenery.

Love the viking picture! Looks neat.

Snow Hammer wrote:

Well, The top ones are screenshots technically   

Yes they are very bright

For the top ones the text probably wouldn't fit in well, but with the serana one they clearly do

Your opinion is your opinion, no need to apologies for it you have high standards because of your experience and the quality of your work, be proud of that
I am only a beginner and i've never done this before so I ain't gonna get it pefect the first time
But anyway, what about these? its a screen of fort dawnguard but i made it into a painting so it does appear a bit darker and less shiny

No Logo:

Original Written logo:

Painted in Logo:

I took those screenshots straight from the main-menu so you could see how the rest of the text fits in.

Thank you very much, I appreciate your input
Cheers

Wow these look really great, nice job! The color palette gives off the perfect vibe. Could you explain what you mean when you say you made it into a painting? Did you actually paint it by hand?

I really like your first design it is really good and colourful but I think it would look berrer if it didn't say 'Viking' on it.

The first ones are great looking! but of the Serana ones I like the third. And the painted in logo of Dawngaurd Looks the best! Good Job!