Screw4ff
Posts : 348 Join date : 2017-02-14 Age : 26 Location : The Vast expanse of hills and nothing else
Character sheet Name: Red Crow Faction: A Lonely boy Level: The amount of times Aarius has changed his profile pic
| Subject: Bomb. A Poem about the End of the World. Mon Feb 27, 2017 12:32 pm | |
| In the end, all we could do was watch. As the apocalypse fell, we knew, We knew we had been lied to. Shock, Denial, anger, Guilt, We Bargain, we became depressed Finally, we accepted what was to come, but There was no hope, no, not for us. It moved down in slow motion, and we mourned ourselves as we fell. Just as the world lightened up, the fire we had inside of ourselves flickered out, and what is left is cold. We didn't know what was next, but we knew what has been, can no Longer be. The old world burned, and we burn, and so we must. In every motion we took, we stepped closer to "this", not one could tell us "stop". There were those that screamed at us, that fell to their knees, that begged and that cried, and not one listened. We even took the people that pleaded for peace,and we crucified them, and we laughed at them, we laughed and said "what fools, how can we lose when we are the great, we are the powerful, we are always the victors." What fools we were, what prideful people, we were truly doomed to fall, weren't we? Its funny now, how clear it was that the end was so imminent, and we were so blind to see what was, what was always, the end.
_________________ Be wary, or become a lonely boy. |
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Timeseeker
Posts : 1097 Join date : 2016-03-26 Age : 28 Location : Wandering from place to place
Character sheet Name: Blues Faction: Light Labs Level: ∞
| Subject: Re: Bomb. A Poem about the End of the World. Mon Feb 27, 2017 1:41 pm | |
| This is beautiful. I love how you even formatted the text to represent a bomb, too. Very nice touch. _________________ |
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Primus_Daibhidh
Posts : 190 Join date : 2017-01-01 Age : 27 Location : UK
Character sheet Name: Daibhidh of Salopia Faction: Caesar's Legion Level: 1
| Subject: Re: Bomb. A Poem about the End of the World. Mon Feb 27, 2017 2:27 pm | |
| That was magnificent. I respect anyone who can make art with words. _________________ True to Caesar! https://discord.gg/VAbpk9M Caesar's Will is the Will of the Legion |
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DVAted
Posts : 5995 Join date : 2014-02-23 Age : 36 Location : in the forests of the night
Character sheet Name: DeViAted Faction: GUNners Level: 55
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Aidan_r_m
Posts : 280 Join date : 2016-03-06 Age : 29 Location : Virginia, Washington DC
Character sheet Name: EddieMcPickle Faction: Don'tTazeMeBro Level: 666
| Subject: Re: Bomb. A Poem about the End of the World. Mon Feb 27, 2017 5:45 pm | |
| Very nice poem, don't see a lot of them here so this is a breath of fresh air. _________________ You're a funny guy Sully, that's why I'm gonna kill you last. -Arnold Schwarzenegger
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ICEBIRD112
Posts : 135 Join date : 2017-02-11 Age : 24 Location : San Antonio
Character sheet Name: Cpl. Danton Faction: H.E.C.U. Marines Level: 25
| Subject: Re: Bomb. A Poem about the End of the World. Mon Feb 27, 2017 5:49 pm | |
| I like and respect this because is feels nice, the wording and sense of a deeper meaning. Also whoever can create a poem about bombs and fit it into the shape of a bomb is fine by me. |
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Screw4ff
Posts : 348 Join date : 2017-02-14 Age : 26 Location : The Vast expanse of hills and nothing else
Character sheet Name: Red Crow Faction: A Lonely boy Level: The amount of times Aarius has changed his profile pic
| Subject: Re: Bomb. A Poem about the End of the World. Mon Feb 27, 2017 6:50 pm | |
| I'm so glad y'all liked it! I write a lot and I got a schedule for putting stuff out so expect more stories/poems. _________________ Be wary, or become a lonely boy. |
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Timeseeker
Posts : 1097 Join date : 2016-03-26 Age : 28 Location : Wandering from place to place
Character sheet Name: Blues Faction: Light Labs Level: ∞
| Subject: Re: Bomb. A Poem about the End of the World. Mon Feb 27, 2017 6:53 pm | |
| - Screw4ff wrote:
- I'm so glad y'all liked it! I write a lot and I got a schedule for putting stuff out so expect more stories/poems.
Nice! I look forward to seeing more of your work here. _________________ |
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