Good day everyone
Here's a 3D model that I'm currently working on, I'd like to share it here with you guys in hoping to get some feedback. I've been 3D modeling for nearly a year now, I've learned a lot, but I would like to improve myself more. So therefore feedback is very welcome

Ohmygod this is awesome!
Model looks great and I like the idea!

Looking good Bauk! I like how expressive his face is.

Thanks jasper-op and Tesvixen!

What kind of feedback are you looking for? Technical related to 3D modeling or something in terms of design like composition, anatomy, reality...

Scorpio9 wrote:

What kind of feedback are you looking for? Technical related to 3D modeling or something in terms of design like composition, anatomy, reality...

Well anything is welcome!
It's definitely not a realistic design, but I do try to get a realistic anatomy. Things like muscles and fat are things I struggle with to make it look realistic, and ofcourse feedback about the 3D modeling itself (like the topology) are more than welcome too!


DVAted:
Yep! I'm still alive and around sometimes
Lol, maybe I'll contribute something to the photo album soon, whenever I feel like it.

And thanks! I agree, rhinos are cool

Silly DVA that's a loincloth, not a tail. :p

Bauk I think its a very cool model so far.  I like that he has a more slender horn (especially since he has forward-facing eyes, a thicker horn could literally impair his vision) and that he's a bit bottom-heavy.  It gives him a lumbering appearance.  

I don't really have any criticism of the model's proportions of anything, its a fictional creature that you made up, so its proportions are up to you!

Model looks good and it is very stylized, if you want to make it more believable there are some tweaks that you could do in anatomy department.
Rhinoceros have bluntly shaped head and your model has more triceratops look because it has beak.

Their skin is really thick and heavy so it forms almost armor like appearance.

Their feet must support their weight there fore they have large surface area in order to reduce amount of pressure created by their bodies per surface area unit.

Its a rhino man... I'm pretty sure he checked realism at the door when he decided to make it, Scorp. :p

To me it looks almost like a Team Fortress 2 or Ninja Turtles-type of character, and personally I think it'd be a mistake to try and make it more realistic.  The model's toon-like look is a big part of its charm, IMO.  Just my opinion, mind you.

Too bad there aren't any bipeds in Fallout that attack with their heads, rhinoman could be rigged to their skeleton!

I should have used word "realistic" instead of "believable", because it still is believable stylized model and a good one as I previously stated.

Now that you mentioned bipedal animations with head attack it just hit me how are FO3 and FNV so cheap on animations regarding animals and their behavior, for example yao guai is a bear and they don't have any animations for situations like when bears stand on two feet to look bigger, or do a slap attack or even go to dumpster to search for food. :/

Yeah they definitely skimped on some creature animations. :/