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Writing update, The Master rises | Writing update, The Master rises | |
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Which Story do you prefer?(Read post first!!!) | The Master Rises | | 100% | [ 5 ] | The Lost city | | 0% | [ 0 ] |
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themaster96
Posts : 201 Join date : 2014-08-12 Location : Brazil
| Subject: Writing update, The Master rises Mon Mar 26, 2018 7:45 am | |
| Hello Gun community
First off i would like to thank everyone that took the time to read my long post and give an even bigger thanks to those that voted in the topic, i've started the writing process for the plot yesterday and, consequently, i bring writing updates!
This is just a very very small piece of what i already wrote, i chose this part because its an important change in the history of the FEV, so here it goes:
"(...)However, William didn’t notice that the more time it passed, the more his personality would become blurred by the Master’s influence, he soon found his every move being dictated by his inner “voice” until it reached a point where there was no distinction between The Master and him. Finally, William Baker was no more, his “death” gave birth to a new entity of dual existence, together they were stronger than ever, they’ve become the symbol of everything that The Unity represents. After years of experiments, their work was finally rewarded, a new strain of the FEV was created, this “perfect” virus not only had all the undesired side effects removed but the advantages it brought to its host were heavily expanded. The “Master” injected his “new” body with this virus and underwent a powerful mutation, the already latent psychic abilities from the brain structure of William Baker were extended to absurd ways, his psionic powers grew so much that it was impossible to predict its full potential, not even the ZAX was able to fully read all the genetic enhancements, the supercomputer could only describe the new Baker as “The most perfect specimen, the apex of human evolution(...)”
So there you go folks, hope you guys liked this little sample, i can guarantee to you there is going to be A LOT more where this came from, as always i encourage you to leave a comment below to tell me your opinion about it, its very important to me to know this, thank you all for the attention and i hope to see you guys soon again with another update
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| | | ahyuser001
Posts : 689 Join date : 2018-01-28
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| Subject: Re: Writing update, The Master rises Tue Mar 27, 2018 6:31 am | |
| Probably more spacing. It really hurt my eyes Kidding aside, I kinda like the story of a "Reborn" Master. _________________ Will there be enough Dakka? |
| | | Posterize4VC
Posts : 200 Join date : 2017-12-08 Age : 25 Location : U.S.
Character sheet Name: Chef Vortivask Faction: N/A Level: 999
| Subject: Re: Writing update, The Master rises Tue Mar 27, 2018 5:45 pm | |
| The Master Rises definitely has my vote. I really liked the Master, and the idea you've presented sounds like it would be one amazing mod to play. _________________ Cursed be the ground, for our sake. Both thorns and thistles it shall bring forth, for us, for out of the ground we were taken for the dust that we are... and to the dust we shall return.
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| | | The Rabid Dog
Posts : 1033 Join date : 2017-10-20 Age : 25 Location : Southern Spain
Character sheet Name: Niko Faction: Myself Level: Over 9000 Chromosomes
| Subject: Re: Writing update, The Master rises Tue Mar 27, 2018 11:19 pm | |
| I'd say The master rises, was pretty awesome. _________________ - Kek:
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| | | themaster96
Posts : 201 Join date : 2014-08-12 Location : Brazil
| Subject: Re: Writing update, The Master rises Thu Mar 29, 2018 12:51 am | |
| Hey i woudl like to say thanks to all the feedback, it really means a lot to me! so The Master Rises won, i will re-start the writing process from where i stopped and i will have updates soon, once again ty you for your vote! |
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