Hello i made some art for G.U.N Please if you have any critiques it will be greatly appreciated !

I love your work with the lighting in this picture!
That being said, there's a few bits I'd like to draw your attention to. (It is a critique after all. =P )

-First thing is the lettering on the flag, you've done a pretty good job of re-sizing the letters to simulate the waving of the flag, the only thing I can see there worth fixing is the 'N', I'd say make it a little larger, about (Or close to.) the size of the 'G'. Might help fill up that other half of the flag there. =)

-Second thing is the hands on your astronaut. And boy, do I feel your pain. >_<
I'm no artist, but I like drawing, and yikes... The hands always trip me up.
Here they seem a little... Off. I'm not sure what to tell you really, they just don't
seem to fit. Sorry if that's a little vague. ._.

-Last thing is the stars in the background. (Assuming they are stars!) It's a great addition and I'm glad you added so many of them. The only thing is... They seem a little over-powered by the foreground picture which is quite a bit brighter than these burning balls of space-gas. Perhaps running a few stars through photoshop with a slight, bright glow setting? Just to make 'em stand out a little bit.

I really can't find anything else worth noting here. Excellent work overall! I can tell this was done free-hand with some love. =D

(P.S: Feel free to shoot me down on any of these if they don't line up. o7 )

@"IIHawkerII" Yes i do see the hands are tiny, Very tiny i do have to account to that next time Thanks!, And i do see the letters are kinda off i tried to simulate that its kinda farther back than the 'G' but i think i did not simulate that well, Thanks for that too. And the stars was a brush i found on the internet lol, so next time ill just do those individually next time i do a space setting, Thank you for the Critique

A little bit more movement .The pose is kinda stiff and bigger hands .Everything esle ish oke.
Still better than what i can draw , alot better.

Tr3ach3ry wrote:

A little bit more movement .The pose is kinda stiff and bigger hands .Everything esle ish oke.
Still better than what i can draw , alot better.

Movement is pretty stiff i must admit gotta do some more studies on posture, Thanks !

yes, better hands, bigger! but I like the idea and the character!

Proudnoob4 wrote:

Tr3ach3ry wrote:

A little bit more movement .The pose is kinda stiff and bigger hands .Everything esle ish oke.
Still better than what i can draw , alot better.

Movement is pretty stiff i must admit gotta do some more studies on posture, Thanks !

No probs . There are a lot of tutorials on how to add ...some kind of motion to the drawing .But eventually you will get the hang of it .

Really cool man! Hands are a bit disproportionate but I think it's really cool!