BoomBewm
Posts : 2559 Join date : 2014-04-30 Age : 34 Location : Bulgaria
Character sheet Name: Levski Faction: Bulgaria Level: 79
| Subject: The Official Creepypasta topic! Fri Aug 05, 2016 12:21 am | |
| Hello Everyone! So this topic, this topic is for everyone and anyone. Here we will all share Creepypasta's written by us, the users! I am one of the persons who can write scary stuff and have lots of imagination but some people dont really have that much of an imagination to write a scary story and those who can write a story can inspire those who cannot and eventually they might start writing too and it will be thanks to you, the person who wrote the story that literally inspired the next scary internet creature, myth, legend and such. I will go first by writing a story which came in my mind today. (Creepypasta will be in Spoiler tag below). PS: Criticism and discussion is allowed in the topic. I really hope no one will be offended by criticism because some people get easily offended by criticism. Its not a bad thing, its just something to help you while writing the next story to learn from the past one's mistake and eventually put out a better story. PPS: Its optional but if you want you can write your story in red or maybe the normal color, I dunno really but red might give some chilling vibes to the story. Anyway happy writing. I cannot wait to read YOUR stories!- Henry:
A young boy named Henry lived in the small town of Maden. Henry was a good boy. His father was a priest, his mother a teacher. Henry had a good life, he loved helping people just as Jesus does. He knew Jesus makes people happy and helps them, so Henry devoted himself to make people happy and help them. Henry was 12 years old when he saw a wounded dog. The dog's leg was hurted bad and Henry wanted to help him, he took the dog and nursed him back at home. The dog repayed Henry by showing affection to him and in time they became friends. One summer night, Henry was playing with his dog on the front lawn of his house. He was playing fetch with the boy and without his knowing a car was approching. Henry accidentaly threw the ball on the street and the dog went to fetch it but sadly...... a car hit the dog. Henry was watching as the dog was struggling with its last breath and that made Henry happy for some reason. He enjoyed how the poor animal suffered and its like a voice inside Henry's head laughted beside him. He buried his dog in the backyard and then the night came. It was a quiet night, him and his family were having dinner and his Father was apperantly mad for some reason. He threw the dish of food on the ground and went into the bathroom. The mother quietly cleaned the dish and went upstairs to sleep. Henry was left alone on the table. Sad, sad Henry, alone. But he wasnt. A voice spoke to him, the voice spoke many things to Henry. Henry was starting to see things. A man dressed in green, whose's face was melting. The voice reffered to itself as ''HIM''. The voice told Henry that if he wants to be like Jesus he must help his parents by putting them in eternal sleep where they would laught and be happy forever. Henry took a knife and went upstairs to make his mother happy. He entered the room, cut her throat and put a pillow on her so the father wouldnt hear her death gulping. Henry felt notty, but he knew he was doing the right thing. Henry went into the bathroom to see his father. the father was drinking himself with a bottle of whiskey, Henry knew that he wronged God and he had to suffer for it, he knew that if he releases his father from his stress, he would be happy with this mom and Jesus in heaven. Henry took the knife out and started stabbing his father in the stomach, his father looked at Henry with emotionless eyes while he was being stabbed. In the meantime, policed arrived at Henry's home because a neighbour called for a sucpicious activity in their home and they saw Henry covered in his father's blood. The police took Henry to a place of happiness and joy, a place they called Ironclad Asylum. Henry was held there for 13 years. A doctor took care of Henry, his name was Lain Vangoret. He was a part American, part German doctor who wanted to study Henry and really took intrest in spending time with Henry, because Henry told the doctor someone speaks to him everyday, someone who loves to make people happy. One day, Henry was out in the garden and doctor Vangoret came, they talked for a bit then Henry started to get some visions, visions of how everyone in the world is happy. Henry knew what had to be done. HIM told Henry to make Lain happy, Henry took the shovel which he worked the Asylum garden wtih and hit Lain in the head and repeatedly stabbed him in the mouth. Oh how happy Henry was, it was the first time he had so much joy in a long time, then he escaped from the asylum. Henry broke the window to a clothing store and changed his attire. He took a pale detective trenchcoat, black pants, fancy black shoes, and leather fingerless gloves. He saw that the store was merged with a barber saloon and he took the razor and cut his long hair to short, he cut his wilf ruffian bear to a clean shaven, after this he went to hunt someone he REALLY needed to make happy. It were the neighbours who had called on Henry. Lucky for him, they were having a family dinner and for uknown reason, HIM was there sitting on the table and looking at Henry with his melted face. Henry took out a butcher knife he took from a store and went right through the front door and then he entered the dining room. First he killed Miss Loraine, then he cut the hands off Mister Parker Loraine and made him watch as he cut open their daughter's body open. HIM started to applaud Henry but Henry was not happy. His life had no meaning anymore, he dint know what to do, he couldnt bring happyness to every person alive so he decided to give something that he never did. To give happyness to himself. He went into his childhood bedroom. He started stabbing himself in the stomach as he laughted. His deep blue eyes started looking emotionless-ly at the mirror infront of him, as he was seeing HIM feeling pain for first time in his life span. He saw how the man in green's suit turned red and his melted face turned into a skull who started to scream in agony. Henry then in his last breath went to bed, never to awake ever again. Henry was happy, forever and ever.
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keatit71
Posts : 917 Join date : 2016-03-30 Age : 23 Location : FNV / Rainy Scotland
Character sheet Name: Tristan Faction: Null Level: Error value too high
| Subject: Re: The Official Creepypasta topic! Mon Aug 08, 2016 4:55 pm | |
| Nice topic if i think of something then i'll put it down here cause i think i could write a decent one just gotta think of it. Will edit this when i have creepy pasta to write down. |
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